Write an Email
·You applied for a merit-based scholarship three weeks ago. The committee was supposed to announce decisions last week, but you have not received any notification. You want to inquire about your application status.
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Key Takeaway
The email addresses the task but lacks specific details and clarity.
Clarity and SyntaxModerate
“If it is not too much trouble might i inquire about how long would it take the committee to make any decision (hopefully positive) in this regard.”
Fix·Could you please let me know the expected timeline for the committee's decision on my application?
Grammatical AccuracyModerate
“I am really looking forward to get the schlorship from your prestigious institute because it will help me excel in the program you are offering.”
Fix·I am really looking forward to receiving the scholarship from your prestigious institute because it will help me excel in the program you offer.
“I had applied for the scholarship vide(app no.) on Tuesday 10th-05-2026.”
Providing specific application details helps the recipient quickly identify the application, which is crucial for efficient communication.
“I am really looking forward to get the schlorship from your prestigious institute because it will help me excel in the program you are offering.”
Expressing enthusiasm for the scholarship and the program demonstrates genuine interest and motivation, which can positively influence the committee's perception.
“If it is not too much trouble might i inquire about how long would it take the committee to make any decision (hopefully positive) in this regard.”
Politely asking about the decision timeline shows respect for the committee's process while also seeking necessary information.
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Grammar Corrections
1 items foundInfinitive 'to get' should be replaced with gerund 'receiving'. Also, 'schlorship' is a typo and should be 'scholarship'.
Email Structure
The greeting is present but could be more formal by including a salutation such as 'Dear Scholarship Committee'.
“Greetings I had applied for the scholarship vide”
The opening paragraph clearly states the purpose of the email and provides necessary context.
The body addresses all requirements but could benefit from clearer syntax and more varied sentence structures.
The closing expresses gratitude and includes a polite request for information, which is effective.
The sign-off is appropriate, though it could be enhanced with a more formal closing such as 'Sincerely'.
“Regards”
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Improvement Roadmap
Enhance sentence variety and clarity by using more complex structures.
Now: If it is not too much trouble might i inquire about how long would it take the committee to make any decision (hopefully positive) in this regard.
Try: Could you please inform me of the expected timeline for the committee's decision?
Improves clarity and demonstrates advanced language use.Correct spelling errors to improve professionalism.
Where: body
Try: Correct 'schlorship' to 'scholarship'.
Use formal salutations and closings to enhance professionalism.
Try: Start with 'Dear Scholarship Committee' and close with 'Sincerely'.