Write an Email
·You recently completed an online course offered by your university. While the content was valuable, you experienced several technical difficulties with the learning platform. You want to provide feedback to the course administrators.
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Estimated TOEFL · Writing
Key Takeaway
The email provides some relevant feedback but suffers from numerous grammatical errors and vague elaboration.
Spelling and grammatical errorsCritical
“varoius online courses availble”
Fix·various online courses available
Lack of detailed suggestions for improvementModerate
“I think trimming the vedios to smght help with this issue.”
Fix·I suggest breaking the videos into shorter segments to prevent them from freezing and requiring a system restart.
“in which I choosed course on biology.”
This provides specific context and shows the student is addressing the task by identifying the course they are discussing.
“The lecture was very synactic and used understanding vocabulary.”
This highlights the student's appreciation for the course content, fulfilling part of the task requirement to describe valuable aspects.
“However, I have faced some issues like the vedio is getting struck an dforcing me ti restart the system.”
Identifying specific technical problems is crucial for providing constructive feedback, which is a key requirement of the task.
Vocabulary & Flow
Use more linking words to improve the flow and coherence of the email, such as 'furthermore', 'in addition', or 'as a result'.
Grammar Corrections
1 items foundIncorrect verb form; 'chose' is the correct past tense of 'choose'.
Email Structure
The greeting is polite and sets a respectful tone for the email.
“Dear Professor, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to share my thoughts on the recent online course offered by the university. There are varoius online courses availble in the site in which I choosed course on biology. The classes were very interesting. The lecture was very synactic and used understanding vocabulary. This helps all the students to understand the topics very clearly. However, I have faced some issues like the vedio is getting struck an dforcing me ti restart the system. This isthe only draback i faced. This might be because of the long length vedios. I think trimming the vedios to smght help with this issue. Thank you fpr your time. Sonerely, Manoj.”
The opening paragraph clearly states the purpose of the email, which is to provide feedback on the course.
While the body addresses the main requirements, it lacks detailed suggestions for improvement.
The closing expresses gratitude but lacks a clear call to action or further engagement.
Your email is missing a proper sign-off. End with "Sincerely," "Best regards," or "Thank you," followed by your name.
Suggested Academic Phrases
Improvement Roadmap
Provide more detailed suggestions for improvements.
Now: I think trimming the vedios to smght help with this issue.
Try: I suggest breaking the videos into shorter segments to prevent them from freezing and requiring a system restart.
Providing detailed suggestions can demonstrate critical thinking and improve the score.Correct spelling errors to improve clarity and professionalism.
Where: body
Try: various online courses available
Use a variety of linking words to enhance coherence.
Try: Furthermore, the course content was engaging and informative.