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Write an Email
·Your local gym recently replaced several treadmills with new models. These new machines are difficult to use and often malfunction. You want to address this issue with the gym management.
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Submitted: Apr 5, 2026, 11:17 AM
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Estimated TOEFL · Writing
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Key Takeaway
The email effectively communicates the issues with the new treadmills and requests a solution, but it lacks specific details and contains grammatical errors.