Write an Email
·You recently completed an online course offered by your university. While the content was valuable, you experienced several technical difficulties with the learning platform. You want to provide feedback to the course administrators.
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Estimated TOEFL · Writing
Key Takeaway
The email addresses some requirements but lacks clarity and coherence, making it difficult to understand.
Lack of detail on technical issuesCritical
“First of all the website for registration is not up to date.”
Fix·Provide specific examples of how the website is outdated, such as error messages or broken links.
Grammatical errorsModerate
“Once this problem is fixed, many student can participate in the course”
Fix·Once this problem is fixed, many students can participate in the course.
“I am writting to express my amzing experience in the course arranged by university.”
This sets a positive tone and shows appreciation, which is important for maintaining a constructive dialogue.
“I believe that these cources enhance our clinical skills and knowldge.”
Acknowledging the course's value demonstrates understanding and appreciation of the educational content, which is crucial for balanced feedback.
“I would like you request the It team to resolve this issue.”
Including a call to action shows initiative and provides clear direction for improvement, which is essential for effective feedback.
Vocabulary & Flow
Consider using additional linking words like 'however' or 'moreover' to enhance coherence.
Grammar Corrections
1 items foundSpelling errors in 'writing' and 'amazing'.
Email Structure
Consider using a more formal greeting like 'Dear Course Administrators'.
“Hello I am writting to express my amzing experience in the course arranged by university.I believe that these cources enhance our clinical skills and knowldge. Furthermore, there are few aspects needed for improvement in the course. First of all the website for registration is not up to date. As a result of this issue many students were not able to register themself. I would like you request the It team to resolve this issue. Once this problem is fixed, many student can participate in the course Thanks for your time Shaban”
The opening sets a positive tone but could be more specific about the course.
The body addresses some requirements but lacks detail and specific suggestions for improvement.
The closing is polite but could be more specific about the desired outcome.
Your email is missing a proper sign-off. End with "Sincerely," "Best regards," or "Thank you," followed by your name.
Suggested Academic Phrases
Improvement Roadmap
Provide specific examples of technical issues.
Now: First of all the website for registration is not up to date.
Try: The registration page frequently crashes and does not save entered information.
Providing specific examples will enhance clarity and demonstrate critical thinking.Use correct spelling and grammar.
Where: body
Try: I am writing to express my amazing experience.
Use formal language throughout.
Try: Dear Course Administrators, I am writing to express my appreciation for the course.