Write an Email
·You applied for a merit-based scholarship three weeks ago. The committee was supposed to announce decisions last week, but you have not received any notification. You want to inquire about your application status.
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Estimated TOEFL · Writing
Key Takeaway
The email is well-structured and clearly communicates the applicant's intent.
Minor grammatical errorMinor
“an merit-based scholarship”
Fix·a merit-based scholarship
Spelling mistakeMinor
“decicions”
Fix·decisions
“I applied for a merit-based scholarship three weeks ago.”
This provides the recipient with specific context, ensuring they can quickly identify the application in question.
“I am still very interested in this opportunity.”
This reinforces the applicant's enthusiasm and commitment, which is important for maintaining a positive impression.
“Could you please let me know the timeline for decisions?”
This demonstrates politeness and respect for the recipient's time, which is crucial in formal communication.
Vocabulary & Flow
Incorporate more transitional phrases to enhance the flow and coherence of the email.
Grammar Corrections
1 items foundThe article 'an' is used before vowel sounds, while 'a' is used before consonant sounds.
Email Structure
The greeting is present and appropriately formal.
“exact”
The opening paragraph clearly states the purpose and provides necessary context.
All requirements are addressed effectively in the body.
The closing paragraph includes a call to action and expresses gratitude, which is appropriate for the context.
The sign-off is present and suitably formal.
“exact”
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Improvement Roadmap
Enhance grammatical accuracy
Now: an merit-based scholarship
Try: a merit-based scholarship
Correcting minor grammatical errors can improve clarity and professionalism, potentially increasing the score.Correct spelling errors
Where: body
Try: decisions
Use more varied transitional phrases
Try: In addition, furthermore